Willy Wonka Jr.

Today, I finished a rough draft of my plot.  I sent a picture of it to Jim Trenberth, asking for his thoughts.  He said that what I came up looks pretty good, and advised that I see if there are any opportunities to build on what I already have.  He also asked that I provide him with a list of what instruments I'll be needing so he can prepare anything that I'll need to rent from Fisher Theater and save some time when the light hang comes along.

So my next step is to go back over my draft and see if there is anything more I could add.